I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Ellen. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job on posting your speech to your blog. I like how you had confidence in yourself to speak about your speech. Great job, keep up the good effort.
Hi Jimmy it's me Murray I love your speech you did a nice job although you made some mistakes it's okay because you can learn from it. It well improve your writhing anyways have an awesome day and keep up the great work.
Hi Jimmy I am Kasa from your class I like how you did your speech with confidence. have a amazing day
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on posting your speech to your blog. I like how you had confidence in yourself to speak about your speech. Great job, keep up the good effort.
-Shriya from Rm11
Hi Jimmy it's me Murray I love your speech you did a nice job although you made some mistakes it's okay because you can learn from it. It well improve your writhing anyways have an awesome day and keep up the great work.
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